tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post609696267349035133..comments2024-03-28T08:30:37.763-04:00Comments on Dystel & Goderich Literary Management: Lauren's Slush Week entryDGLMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03594925221862242748noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-79257191876110776772015-09-18T22:54:12.266-04:002015-09-18T22:54:12.266-04:00I say many thanks to Mr. admin website I read this...I say many thanks to Mr. admin website I read this, because in this website I know a lot of information information that I did not know before his<br /><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/rS0kHj" rel="nofollow">Obat Tumor Telinga Luar</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/0WKcBg" rel="nofollow">Obat Wasir Ibu Hamil Muda Dan Tua</a><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/XJVnp8" rel="nofollow">Penanganan TBC Paru</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/1eBzeJ" rel="nofollow">Obat Untuk Menghilangkan Tumor Bibir</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/yEGDNF" rel="nofollow">Cara Menghilangkan Diabetes Melitus Tipe 1</a> keishkaylaaazzalea@gmail.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01381564380919953330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-41706965125069938782010-03-08T10:53:01.644-05:002010-03-08T10:53:01.644-05:00Just jumping in here to say, thanks for doing slus...Just jumping in here to say, thanks for doing slush week, very informative, and plenty to mull over re: my own queries.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-57585256350459689502010-03-08T10:30:40.983-05:002010-03-08T10:30:40.983-05:00Four for Bloomies! That made me laugh and was the ...Four for Bloomies! That made me laugh and was the turning point - it got me hooked and endeared the character to me. I would definitely read this. Good luck, author!Alli Sinclairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00363202163419352155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-85284347227672172992010-03-07T13:28:23.129-05:002010-03-07T13:28:23.129-05:00I liked the Bloomie's line, too. A lot of suc...I liked the Bloomie's line, too. A lot of successful paranormnal/UF out there is pretty humorous, and this shows me the author has the knack.<br /><br />Just my two cents. :)Debra Drizahttp://www.houndrat.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-56744786396340163422010-03-06T20:08:45.185-05:002010-03-06T20:08:45.185-05:00Two for Bloomingdale's! The point [i]is[/i] t...Two for Bloomingdale's! The point [i]is[/i] that it's trivial and that the character's not living up to her potential. That was the line that made me sit up and pay attention, too.Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07479195068356892857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-9185702588670714662010-03-06T08:41:33.327-05:002010-03-06T08:41:33.327-05:00One for Bloomingdales. One not. Interesting.One for Bloomingdales. One not. Interesting.GhostFolk.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10942600698461250382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-51670383064771467732010-03-05T20:46:21.377-05:002010-03-05T20:46:21.377-05:00Thank you for taking the time to share your respon...Thank you for taking the time to share your responses to these letters with your visitors. It's very interesting and helpful!Jody W. and Meankittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13733607365443126784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-32859701947698705072010-03-05T19:41:59.225-05:002010-03-05T19:41:59.225-05:00I like this query and the concept. However, I woul...I like this query and the concept. However, I would take out the "Bloomindale bargains" part. It lends a trivial nature to a story that is high stakes. I would put "bending spoons in her mind" in the beginning. It justifies her being sought out like she is some MIT grad and not scanning shoes.<br /><br />This reminds me of the Firm in some way. Interested to see what they agents say!Jennoreply@blogger.com