tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post8737701137800325306..comments2024-03-17T03:15:20.845-04:00Comments on Dystel & Goderich Literary Management: Slush Week: The recapDGLMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03594925221862242748noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-3291354799117426212010-03-10T13:03:31.606-05:002010-03-10T13:03:31.606-05:00Thanks very much for all of your posts and comment...Thanks very much for all of your posts and comments on Slush Week. It's been incredibly helpful. <br /><br />I just posted the following Tweet, and I'd be so thankful to hear how the agents here would answer the question:<br /><br />#askagent A new author with a successful novel in the Kindle store: Would this make you more or less likely to want to represent that title?Moses Siregar IIIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14054458331242370871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-40197676172939512572010-03-10T10:45:44.007-05:002010-03-10T10:45:44.007-05:00Woah, slow down, anonymous. There are definitely t...Woah, slow down, anonymous. There are definitely times we pass on things because we have something too similar on our lists, and just because that's the case doesn't mean we're going to explain the reasoning to someone who queried. <br /><br />"It wasn't what we were looking for" CAN mean it wasn't good. It also CAN mean that it's too competitive with something we already handle. <br /><br />Yes, most of the time we pass on things because they don't stand out to us as especially wonderful, but there are countless other reasons that some material might not get requested.<br /><br />So Christine, yes, you do want to find people who do books similar to the one you've written. That might mean you hit one or two people who have something TOO close, but it's still the best option out there. Good luck!<br /><br />--JimDGLMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03594925221862242748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-28461942693336618552010-03-10T07:28:54.432-05:002010-03-10T07:28:54.432-05:00Christine,
If that's the case, an agent will ...Christine,<br /><br />If that's the case, an agent will tell you, in very clear terms, that's what they're doing. If an agent doesn't tell you that, it wasn't the reason you got rejected. <br /><br />An agent's individual taste is a factor. But you can see from last week that it wasn't anything like the main issue. When an agent says 'it wasn't what we were looking for', they don't mean 'it failed my personal, secret agenda, something you, a mere outsider, are not privy to', they mean 'we were looking for something good'. <br /><br />Do your research, submit to agents who say they're looking for a book like yours, but don't waste too much time and energy second-guessing them, spend it on the prose and expressing your ideas.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-89830782467192873762010-03-09T20:09:49.148-05:002010-03-09T20:09:49.148-05:00Love, love, loved it, and am very grateful. One ho...Love, love, loved it, and am very grateful. One hopes that your efforts in author education will pay off in shorter slush piles. <br /><br />A question remains:<br />We are told to do our homework and seek out agents who rep similar titles/authors to our own work. The goal is to find an agent who "gets" what we do. I'm wondering if that approach could rule out a potential match, being too similar to a project/author you already rep?<br /><br />Thanks again!christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17283976216433006800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-83093859619163109842010-03-09T15:05:18.591-05:002010-03-09T15:05:18.591-05:00I've read every piece of query advice I could ...I've read every piece of query advice I could find, but I've learned the most from actual queries (successful or not) -- and even more from those with agent comments. Thanks for Slush Week, and here's hoping for another!Donna Gambalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00317767593205769881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-49981302443647717602010-03-09T14:15:14.589-05:002010-03-09T14:15:14.589-05:00Interesting question: "would any of you come ...Interesting question: "would any of you come to a different decision than your colleagues did?" <br /><br />As for me, yes. I would have turned down Rachel's and very likely Lauren's. I think both of their critiques were spot on, though I might have been less forgiving. <br /><br />The only one I would have requested was Jessica's.<br /><br />-JimDGLMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03594925221862242748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-22714378858637798872010-03-09T13:49:19.032-05:002010-03-09T13:49:19.032-05:00Thank you for Slush Week. I especially enjoyed se...Thank you for Slush Week. I especially enjoyed seeing where the agents differed in expectations. To me, that was the best - what each individual prefers so I can better personalize my query. Except, I can't because I submitted to DGLM a couple weeks before these postings. I was thrilled to see a couple things I did "right" and can see others that still need improvement. Yes, I hope DGLM does this again.Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09730128917156478287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-61851910720885639892010-03-09T13:20:04.845-05:002010-03-09T13:20:04.845-05:00'it was a bit reassuring to see that even from...'it was a bit reassuring to see that even from agent to agent the ideas of what does and doesn't work vary greatly.'<br /><br />I didn't take away that message at all. Yes, agents have different taste, but the problems were more fundamental than that.<br /><br />I think it's really unhelpful for prospective authors to think it's the *agent's* fault their stuff gets rejected, that it's some whim or you failed to crack their secret code, or if you'd got Jim not Jessica on Tuesday not Thursday then you'd have made your fortune. <br /><br />DGLM makes you submit to a particular agent, listing what they're looking for and what they're not looking for. You submitted to that individual agent, sent them something you thought they'd like. If they didn't, it's not *their* fault (or their lesson to be learned, for that matter). <br /><br />I guess that's another question for the agents, then: looking at all nine queries, would any of you come to a different decision than your colleagues did?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-1412039029781350892010-03-09T12:37:51.423-05:002010-03-09T12:37:51.423-05:00Thanks a lot. I learned so much and am reworking m...Thanks a lot. I learned so much and am reworking my query. Thanks for all the time you all put into this.Triciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03564340816607727030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-18146762903882683032010-03-09T10:29:43.071-05:002010-03-09T10:29:43.071-05:00I'll add my thank you for doing SW and I'm...I'll add my thank you for doing SW and I'm hoping that you'll do it again! Next time (yes, I know it's called Slush Week) but I would love to see more diversity. If you could give us some examples of good queries vs bad ones and those in between, I think it could be very helpful. Some may say that it would be a waste of time because it would be too obvious, but I'm not so sure. What one agent may think is good, another agent might think it's just okay, etc. <br /><br />Just a thought, and thanks again!Lynnhttp://itsallmaya.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-18163427008391399332010-03-09T10:02:55.817-05:002010-03-09T10:02:55.817-05:00I really enjoyed Slush Week - thanks for doing it!...I really enjoyed Slush Week - thanks for doing it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-26312280883484148642010-03-09T09:34:14.332-05:002010-03-09T09:34:14.332-05:00A few comments on comments!
“I have a couple ques...A few comments on comments!<br /><br />“I have a couple questions for the future (and maybe these were answered, and I just missed it). There were a lot of places where the agents seemed to want more information, and yet we're always advised to keep queries brief. I've also read that agents don't want you to give too much away - just give them enough information to want to keep reading. I realize it's a fine line to walk. Perhaps if you do this again, you could address those types of questions regarding length and how much of the plot-line you should include.”<br /><br />--This is a bigger question than I can answer in the comments, but I’ll pass it along to the others to see if anyone can use their post to answer it!<br /><br />“I have always secretly felt that my own work is both brilliant and original and if not that good -- that it was at least more interesting than 50% of the work you see on the shelves.”<br /><br />--If you didn’t believe that, you’d have no business sending in your query! <br /><br />“What does negotiating with a publisher actually look like? Banging a fist around a conference table or polite email and waiting?”<br /><br />--Think Mommie Dearest’s Pepsico scene… No, actually there are as many different negotiating styles as there are agents and editors. But another good topic for a future post!<br /><br />-JimDGLMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03594925221862242748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-49412423645354793692010-03-08T22:40:15.860-05:002010-03-08T22:40:15.860-05:00Great advice, Tracy! And thanks DGLM for this info...Great advice, Tracy! And thanks DGLM for this informative series. And thanks, Jim for the clarification on comp titles: compare your work with bestsellers and "books you love" as long as they aren't the work of literary gods.Anne R. Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02420000168356370825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-35506600376659290072010-03-08T22:23:56.051-05:002010-03-08T22:23:56.051-05:00Loved Slush Week! I vote, hope, for another round,...Loved Slush Week! I vote, hope, for another round, soon. Thanks, it was very informativeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-84478135877925380682010-03-08T21:57:34.299-05:002010-03-08T21:57:34.299-05:00Thank you very much for doing this! Our work as wr...Thank you very much for doing this! Our work as writers would be far tougher indeed if not for agents who go out of their way to try to help us. Nothing is forcing you to do this, so thanks again.Rachael Hanelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12198083613814097344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-5790618958982558842010-03-08T21:29:01.105-05:002010-03-08T21:29:01.105-05:00Although I'm not yet at the query writing stag...Although I'm not yet at the query writing stage, I definitely enjoy reading the critiques. It helps me focus on the ultimate goal--getting to the point where I'm ready to query. <br /><br />Thanks!katherinemariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15535748111219350141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-18055284357861532442010-03-08T19:25:07.997-05:002010-03-08T19:25:07.997-05:00I learned not to query your favorite agents the fi...I learned not to query your favorite agents the first go around. ;o)<br /><br />Since the query process can be so subjective, wait until you start getting some serious nibbles before you go after your faves!<br /><br />Actually, it was a bit reassuring to see that even from agent to agent the ideas of what does and doesn't work vary greatly. A bit of a double edged sword since it makes it hard to find "perfection", but it makes the hit to the ego a little easier to take.Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726858055689145824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-45211800046814839492010-03-08T18:09:23.470-05:002010-03-08T18:09:23.470-05:00'It's best not to speak anonymously for ot...'It's best not to speak anonymously for others.'<br /><br />Well, Fatcaster - I suspect that's not your real name, so please don't get on too high a horse about me posting anonymously - I wasn't speaking for anyone but myself. <br /><br />I enjoyed it, a lot. If DGLM did this again in a few months, I suspect many of the things they'd have to say would fall into the same patterns they did this time. It's nice to think that every failed query fails for unique reasons, but even from a sample of nine, we can see that's not the case. <br /><br />So, archiving this somewhere and pointing new people at it may be a better use of resources than telling an endless succession of different people that they'd consider a novel about a paranormal Mary Sue, but it would *really* have to stand out, and theirs didn't. <br /><br />That's all. It was entertaining and informative. I suspect it would be a little less entertaining and a lot less informative second, third and fourth time around. <br /><br />If there is some kind of 'making the process transparent' thing further down the line, it might be nice to see another part of the process, not the same part again. What does negotiating with a publisher actually look like? Banging a fist around a conference table or polite email and waiting?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-73429607430789683372010-03-08T18:03:07.153-05:002010-03-08T18:03:07.153-05:00I felt it was a fantastic exercise, but I was a bi...I felt it was a fantastic exercise, but I was a bit staggered at how bland and unoriginal the submissions seemed to be. I have always secretly felt that my own work is both brilliant and original and if not that good -- that it was at least more interesting than 50% of the work you see on the shelves -- but the query letters you picked for your examples were all very bland, fairly to extremely unoriginal and not 'standout' representations of their chosen genre.<br /><br />How did those authors expect to get picked up by a publisher when they were not working on anything unique (or at least with a unique voice)?<br /><br />It must be tough to weed through the slush pile and I really appreciate that you took the time to give us a little inside peek into your world.<br /><br />(P.S.: Shame on you for not picking my brilliant and original submission to critique. Ha!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-16858785046769858832010-03-08T17:47:06.897-05:002010-03-08T17:47:06.897-05:00This was one of the most helpful exercises on quer...This was one of the most helpful exercises on queries that I've seen. What stands out about it, as other commentors have said, is the window into the varied approaches / opinions among agents. Of course, there were also some commonalities in the advice given, and *that* was very helpful as well. I appreciate your doing this very much, and I hope you do it again.Esperantohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12051691926591464516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-25865376525612582632010-03-08T17:33:41.340-05:002010-03-08T17:33:41.340-05:00I thought this was very helpful and would love to ...I thought this was very helpful and would love to see another round in the future. What I think was most unique was that your entire staff participated. This helped to see a variety of perspectives and remind us that while there are common rules, tastes do vary. It was a great learning experience! Thank you!Lisa Katzenbergerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03541571187216239983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-72813398811441837592010-03-08T17:26:02.826-05:002010-03-08T17:26:02.826-05:00Yes, please do this again! Thanks for going the ex...Yes, please do this again! Thanks for going the extra mile.Victoria Dixonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14012092208934951963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-29895462230811272762010-03-08T16:58:13.348-05:002010-03-08T16:58:13.348-05:00I was about to say exactly what Shelley said. Onya...I was about to say exactly what Shelley said. Onya, Shelley. What I take away from the exercise is the absolute necessity of doing your homework for each agent you query. Research their needs, wants, likes and dislikes. The internet gives us all a quick and painless way to do this. A query letter is something that requires a lot of thought and your best writing. It's not something to dash off after your third Martini on a Friday after work.<br /><br />I very much appreciate the agents at Dystel & Goderich taking the time to help writers with this important process. It reaffirms my belief that this is one of the best agencies out there.Michael G-Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07947421844294471304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-59197378922284350302010-03-08T16:57:36.103-05:002010-03-08T16:57:36.103-05:00I found the exercises and the recap both very help...I found the exercises and the recap both very helpful. Thanks.Yat-Yeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04028075516122778317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34218279.post-21692684235448074302010-03-08T16:46:59.194-05:002010-03-08T16:46:59.194-05:00This really was a great learning exercise. I think...This really was a great learning exercise. I think doing it again would be greatly appreciated. Unfortunately kismet isn't something we can learn. ;-)Alli Sinclairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00363202163419352155noreply@blogger.com